Archive for January 2015

Thursday, 29 January 2015

जिंदगी...
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जिंदगी...


कभी हँसती तो कभी रोती है ये जिंदगी...,

नित नये रंग बदलती और देखाती है ये जिंदगी...,

कभी खुल के हँसो तो अनजाने ही आँखों में नमी लाती है जिंदगी...,

भूली बिसरी बातें याद दिलाती है ये जिंदगी...!!!

दीप 

Monday, 26 January 2015

गुमान...
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गुमान...


हर चेहरे पर गुमान उसके होने का होता है...,
ये दिल जो ना बस सका ,खाली मकान सा अब भी उसका है...,
वैसे तो बुहत से दर्द मिट गए इस दिल से लेकिन...,
जो मिट ना सका वो एक नाम उसका है...III
दीप

Thursday, 22 January 2015

Book Review- “When Only Love Remains, Durjoy Datta”
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Book Review- “When Only Love Remains, Durjoy Datta”


A very interesting story, explaining relationships, discovering some new bold aspects of today’s world...

The story is about love, relationships and championship. The book was quite interesting in its initial parts which are the unique part of the author writing. But then a twist of event occurs and it’s becomes ominous. The author has beautifully penned down the gloomy section well that readers don’t lose interest. Indeed it’s good how time progressed and where the true love is highlighted.

Avanti is a flight attendant who is living her dream. Devrat is a struggling singer who is slowly destroying away his life. Avanti has been his fan ever since she watched his first video when she was only a young teenager. She has obsessed over him for years.

Finally they meet. Their first meeting brings them closer and they wish that there was no end to that night. They are drawn closer and fall for each other. But life can never be so simple can it?

It’s condonable who writer has written those tear jerking portions. They seem so real and so emotional. I won’t say much about those chapters as I don’t want to spoil it for the readers but I just loved the way the book ended. It was a perfect climax for me.

The story gradually turns into love story, as generally love stories are not so smooth. I thoroughly enjoyed reading ‘When Only Love Remains’. The climax was quite interesting with twists and turns. To unfold the same you need to read this book.

Now my Positive viewpoints:

The concept of the story is really nice and absorbing. This is a great achievement by the author for writing such a striking work of fiction. Even the climax of the story has been scripted well. Overall, When Only Love Remains is highly recommended by me to all those who craves for romance fictions. It will make you smile, it will make you laugh and it will make you cry. But most of all, it will brew that romantic feeling that will make you fall in love with your loved ones all over again.

Some suggestive points:

Overall the book is good and very well expressed. The twist in the climax leaves a little confusion in readers mind, till he/she reaches the end. The author could have tried different way for climax, that would have left great impact on readers.

Final words:

Overall if asked I would say...this is an exceptional job done by Author (Durjoy Datta) … I would give 4.5 stars to this book.

Saturday, 17 January 2015

धूंध और धुँए...
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धूंध और धुँए...


ये धूंध और धुँए से लिपटी राहें...

 खोये है रास्तें, मंजिल का पता कोई पायें भी तो कैसे ???

 है हर सू बडी खामोश बेबसी का मंज़र...,

 नि:शब्द है सब शब्द मेरे, पता पायें भी तो कैसे ???

 हर रात तेरी यादों है मेरे जेहन पे तारी...,

 अब तो अपनी ही साँसे लगती है मुझको भारी...,

क़त्ल करता है ये अंधेरा,सुबह का पता पाए भी तो कैसे???


मतलब परस्ती की उलझनें, हर रिश्ते में कुछ ऐसी पायी...,


खो चूके है सब कुछ,अब खूद का पता पायें भी तो कैसे ???

दीप

Wednesday, 14 January 2015
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आख़िरी बार ...


तेरे हाथ का मखमली स्पर्श...अभी तक याद है, मुझे...
तेरे हाथों में मेरा हाथ था उस दिन मुझे छुआ था तूने...,
पढ़ी थी मैंने, महसूस की थी तेरे हाथों की सारी लकीरें.., 
पर ना जाने क्यों एक भी लकीर परमेरा नाम ना लिखा था तूने...

अक्सर सोचती हूँ...तुम्हारे लिखे हुए उन खतों को ...,
वो सारे ख़त मैं बार- बार रोज़ - रोज़...,
क्यों ना जाने क्यों आज नही पढ़ती हूँ...,
वो सारे ख़त...मुझे क्यों आज भी प्यारे से लगते हैं...

तुम बस मेरा ख्याल तो नहीं हो मेरे महबूब...,
तुम पास नहीं आज.., पर ये खत सहारा जीने का...,
आज भी महसूस करती हूँ...तुम्हारे हाथों की महक...,
अपने हाथो को कभी कभी प्यार से सहला लेती हूँ मैं...,
तुम्हारे हाथों की वो छुअन...,वो  सौधी सी मादक महक...

आज भी उन्हीं गलियों में, उसी चौराहे पर हूँ ...,
जहाँ आखिरी बार कभी हम मिले थे यहीं...,
जहाँ मेरे दर्द के बहती बूंदोको कभी छुआ था तूने..., 
जहाँ अपनी रहा में खुद को गँवा तुझे पाया था मैने ...!!!

दीप
(Published in a anthology' Kavyashala') 

Tuesday, 6 January 2015

बेवफ़ाई...
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बेवफ़ाई...


दुनिया के सितम से नहीं तनहाई से डर लगता है...,
प्यार से नहीं पर यार की बेवफ़ाई से डर लगता है...!
दिल को होती है दिलबर के दीदार की हसरत...,
पर दिलबर से मिलने के बाद,जुदाई से डर लगता है...!!!

दीप

Friday, 2 January 2015
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Only You...


You're the first thing I think of every morning when I rise...,
You're the last thing I think of when I close my eyes...

You're in each thought I have and every breath I take...,
My feelings are growing stronger with every move you make...

You're an angel from above who takes away my pain...,
My love for you is so strong; it’s always just the same...

You're the miracle in my life that can always make me smile...,
Just knowing that you care makes my life worth-while...

You've touched my heart and soul which you have from the start...,
Your warm soft words will never leave my heart...

You are everything I want you're so pure and true...,
I love you with everything I have and I love everything that you do...

Deep